This is the monologue I worked on last week at the TMI Women’s Weekend Retreat. It’s by no means perfect either as a monologue or as anything else, but then again, this blog is named, “The Early Draft.” You need to imagine the text read out loud, if you can.
It’s Friday morning and I’m driving my mother to the hairdresser. My car is a mess. Empty water bottles fall to the floor and onto the seats from my dashboard. My mother tries to catch one rolling off of the console. Rather than say to her, “Just let it roll to the floor,” I grab the bottle roughly out of her nervous, twitching hands and stuff it between my legs.
“Ooooooohhhh, Jesus,” she says under her breath. She recoils, as if I’ve struck her.
My mother is 82, and while not ancient, the decades and the gallons of vodka and diet cokes have combined to create an elderly woman who does not comprehend easily.
A few years ago, I tried to teach her to use a PC. She called me at work.
“The mouse isn’t working!”
“Are you moving the mouse across the screen?”
“ARE YOU MOVING THE MOUSE ACROSS THE SCREEN?”
“Yes, what’s wrong????”
We determine that physically, literally, my mother is lifting up the mouse and rolling it across the LCD monitor. Three more lessons on using a mouse and a mouse pad. This is why I refuse to buy a Brita water filter. I am sick of having to explain every fucking thing three times.
Yet each Friday night, I stand in the Stop and Shop, Aisle 8, and stare at the Brita Water Filters. For ten minutes I study sizes, prices, read about health and environmental benefits – no plastic bottles to destroy the earth, only happy minerals left in your water. What a good idea.
After each weekly study, I move on down the aisle and buy a 24-pack of bottled water, knowing all the bottles will eventually land in the trash, with a few rolling around in the car. My mother can figure out how to open a cap on a bottle of water, but how would I explain to her the Brita water filtration system?
My mother and I, born 32 years apart, are both experiencing vaginal itching. When she finally admits her symptoms to me and to a doctor, which takes her the better part of a year – imagine itching for a year – the doctor assumes she has a yeast infection. He gives her a prescription and a recommendation for Vagisil or Monostat cream, until the pills kick in. When I start having similar symptoms, I go to the gynecologist. Well, I get her nurse practitioner. She inspects my vagina; she’s at least 15 years younger than I am. This is what she says:
“Your vagina it atrophying.”
Wonderful. What every woman wants to hear.
“The cells are drying up, shrinking,” she continues, without mercy. “The dryness leads to itching. It’s a bigger problem in menopause than hot flashes, but no one talks about it. Because it’s embarrassing.”
The nurse practitioner gives me a prescription for Estrogen cream and explains clearly: Take a small amount on your finger and insert it into your vagina every night for two weeks, then twice a week after that.
“For how long?” I ask.
“For the rest of your life.”
My mother’s Vagisil and Monostat do not help her. Neither do the pills meant to kill a yeast infection. During one of her doctor’s appointments, I tell her primary care physician, that I, too, have vaginal itching and Estrogen cream has helped. The doctor agrees it can’t hurt for my mother to try it.
Soon, we have individual tubes of Estrogen cream. I hide mine far out of reach. That’s all I need, you know, sharing a tube of vaginal cream with my mother.
On the drive home from the pharmacy, I explain to her, “Use it every night for two weeks, and after that, twice a week.”
“What?” she asks, of course.
“USE IT EVERY NIGHT FOR TWO WEEKS, AND AFTER THAT, TWICE A WEEK .
She says nothing.
Two months later, on the way home from another visit to the doctor for her quarterly checkup of everything, she says, “I need another tube of that cream.”
“What? How much are you using? A tube can last 6 months.”
“I’m doing what you said. I’m using it twice a day.”
“Are you fucking kidding me? That’s the opposite of what I said. I’m not taking responsibility for that!”
She sits, as always, passive in my passenger seat, then passive-aggressive, “I thought you said…”
And I cut her off, “I SAID ONCE A NIGHT FOR TWO WEEKS, THEN TWICE A WEEK!”
She says nothing, my 82 year old mom; the old lady hangs her lower lip. Once again, I have intimidated her into silence.
“Do you understand?”
“Repeat it to me.” Oh god, I never wanted kids.
“Once a night…for…two weeks….and, um… twice a week after that.”
“Yeah, just skip the two week thing this time, okay? TWICE A WEEK.”
How the hell am I going to explain a Brita Water Filter to this woman?
So instead, I rip water bottles from her old hands, and make her cry, “Oooooh, Jesus.”
I am 50 years old. I am in menopause, mourning the loss of my period – well, that’s what my psychiatrist says. This means I’m not in a good mood most of the time. I am not with a lover. I am with my mother. We’re both living in the house I bought a decade ago and twice a week sticking Estrogen cream up our vaginas.
This is not how I envisioned my life. But there you have it: vaginal itching and elderly abuse.
My mother is a drunk until she is 77 years old and I am 45. She comes home so drunk one night, she collapses in my downstairs hallway.
I yell. “I’M NOT 8 YEARS OLD ANYMORE AND I DON’T HAVE TO TAKE THIS SHIT. I’M 45 AND THIS IS MY GODDAMNED HOUSE AND YOU WILL NEVER COME BACK TO MY HOUSE DRUNK AGAIN. DO YOU GET IT?”
“Just let me lie here,” she says, “I’m fine.”
“THIS WILL NEVER FUCKING HAPPEN AGAIN. DO YOU GET IT?”
I repeat, “DO YOU GET IT?”
“Yes, I get it. I’m fine. Let me lie here.”
I scream and criticize her for another 30 minutes as she lies on the floor, paralyzed, poisoned from vodka. I don’t try to help her. I yell. “I CAN’T FUCKING BELIEVE YOU’RE STILL DOING THIS,” and “DO YOU THINK THIS IS FAIR TO ME?”
“Just let me lie here,” is all she says. “I’m fine.”
That is the last time my mother takes a drink of alcohol.
I guess I ripped the bottle from her hands that night, too.
This is your…gosh, I don’t even know how to express how much I f-ing love this piece, Cindy. This is you, your voice, your life, your present and your past. I so want to read the memoir of your life with your mother and father. It’s perfect…it’s amazing xoxoxoxo Hannah
Wow, thank you, Hannah. That makes me feel really good. I mean, seriously good. Will you be having another workshop like the one I attended several months ago? I’d love to do that again. In the meantime, let’s talk about doing coffee. I’m glad you’re a fan. I’m one of yours, too. xo
Great stuff, Cindy. You have a really great way with a story. I wish I had your gift.. but I’m happy to have you friendship instead.
Charles, I’m sure you tell a great story, although I haven’t yet read your work. I, too, am glad we are friends. Stay in touch and thank you for your kindness.
i smile at the irony. you have a wonderful gift, cindy. i am so happy that you share it with all of us.
Thank you so much for the really nice words. Are you a Robin I know or someone I don’t? In any case, I do appreciate you reading this and commenting. 🙂 Cindy
Okay, I looked up the email address and now I know this is my old friend, Robin. I was hoping it was you. 🙂
sorry cindy, it is robin hall
Thanks, Robin. I figured it out later. Thanks for reading!
The words that come to mind about your piece: powerful, disturbing, vivid . . . and touching. Your relationship with your mother is obviously very complex and yet, in the span of about 900 words or so, you manage to reveal a lifetime’s worth of pain and disappointment—on both sides. I’m guessing this is probably not how your mother envisioned her life either. My only question is: Why hasn’t some publisher signed you yet?
You are SO kind. Thank you for continuing to read and support my work. You are right that this isn’t how my mother envisioned her life either. In a longer work, I address that point, although briefly. You are also right that my relationship with her is complex. I’m so touched that you think a publisher should pick up my work. I’m hoping for that, too. I haven’t made the big push yet, because I’m still getting together a full-length manuscript. However, I’m making little pushes… and getting some of my work published in literary journals.
I hope all is well with you. Please keep coming back. 🙂
What an awesome and powerful piece! It really is just unbelievable. I think this definitely deserves to be published. After reading this, I am totally hooked! I can’t wait for your new postings!
Erik, you are so awesome to read my stuff and say such great things. Your words mean a lot to me. This piece is also for “performance.” I’ve been taking some Page to Stage workshops to learn how to turn my writing into performance. Anyway, thank you again for your wonderful words. xo
OMG. I read this again. It made me think but it also did make me laugh out loud. I just love this story. I would love to see you perform it some time. I just love this story!!!
This left me speechless, just some tears in my eyes. This is not a bad thing, I love to read, I love to feel, and this blog made me feel a little bit of what you were in that car. Thank you for sharing.
Hi Deanna, thank you for the wonderful comments. Thank you for feeling so much. Thank you for still talking to me after you felt a little bit of me in that car. I wasn’t too proud of my behavior. But thank you. xo